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For Queen and Country
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 senzukii - posted on: 2008-07-07 22:04:27
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For Queen and Country
By Joey Woodward
Soldiers, oh soldiers, everywhere
Whenever you see them, you stand and stare
What seems to us, just a uniform
Is a proud individual, standing tall
Whilst training hard
With muscles torn
A boy is transformed
A man is then born
The pain that’s endured
You cannot compare
Much worse than an attack
Even that of a bear
The constant late nights
The lack of sleep
Concentration of mind
The struggle to compete
The war they fight
Is much worse than we see
Yet they still do there best
For Queen and Country
Bit of feedback. Only took a little while, any good, or not?
edited 2008-07-07 22:09:27
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#1 -
 JAYYYY - posted on: 2008-07-07 22:24:43
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deep |
#2 -
senzukii - posted on: 2008-07-07 22:27:08
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I`m confused. Is that good?
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#3 -
gunsman - posted on: 2008-07-07 23:01:09
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xml is just saying his personal preference towards recieving anal sex. :D
As for the poem, very good, did you steal it off someone? lol |
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JAYYYY - posted on: 2008-07-07 23:15:48
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| | TmG.gunsman said: | | | xml is just saying his personal preference towards recieving anal sex. :D
As for the poem, very good, did you steal it off someone? lol |
BLATES! PHWOAR!!
srsly tho was quite good |
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senzukii - posted on: 2008-07-07 23:23:57
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Lol sure didn`t. Just been writing a few. Anymore feedback much appreciated. |
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 metz - posted on: 2008-07-08 01:53:29
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imo its quite good but i think an english guy can say more about it :p |
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RYAnnn - posted on: 2008-07-08 01:57:21
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it's good, but write poems about something more meaningful than your lust for the queens yeast infection |
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senzukii - posted on: 2008-07-08 02:15:20
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Being a british soldier, I don`t personally fight for Queen and Country, but for money and because it's fun.
So i think it's unfair to say I lust for the Queens yeast!
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